Tuesday, October 26, 2010

A Breath Apart - October 26, 2010

A Breath Apart

Those breathings of the softest hours turn
On golden leaves that fall away
Your kisses upon my neck will still burn
When heaven's stars meet
The light of day

Half-awake, I still stand a breath apart
Remembering a budding flower
Lovely angel wings flutter in my heart
As I recall those sweet
Love filled hours

Among the things which move the waves along
Is my tender vision of your hands
A gentle grace with moves so strong
My ebb and flow
At your command

A dove's wings sweep across this flaming blush
Spreading like the rising sun
Upon a chest of happiness a burst of rush
Softly hints of an eternity
Of two becoming one

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010


Phill Senters said...

Awesome Neva...This evokes memories of long ago.

Kathy K said...

Sounds like you have a permanent smile of happiness on your face. Our greatest joys and our greatest pain, both make for great poetry.

Kate Smedley said...

There an ethereal quality to this poem, as Phill said, awesome.

lorilynn said...

just lovely, dreamy and beautiful neva

Anonymous said...

The flow of words you have penned is wondrous. The joys of love never ends. I got goose bumps! Brilliant my friend. : )

ensemble5 said...

This description of love is wonderful .... Great poem Neva ~~

Jack said...

this is really nice! Neva, bravo and thank you for an awesome poem :))

Anonymous said...

its when i need refreshed and reminded of the affirmative power of Love, i know these pages and words will always uplift

welshpoet said...

Beautiful work

revivor said...

you catch the mood perfectly