A Breath Apart
Those breathings of the softest hours turn
On golden leaves that fall away
Your kisses upon my neck will still burn
When heaven's stars meet
The light of day
Half-awake, I still stand a breath apart
Remembering a budding flower
Lovely angel wings flutter in my heart
As I recall those sweet
Love filled hours
Among the things which move the waves along
Is my tender vision of your hands
A gentle grace with moves so strong
My ebb and flow
At your command
A dove's wings sweep across this flaming blush
Spreading like the rising sun
Upon a chest of happiness a burst of rush
Softly hints of an eternity
Of two becoming one
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
Those breathings of the softest hours turn
On golden leaves that fall away
Your kisses upon my neck will still burn
When heaven's stars meet
The light of day
Half-awake, I still stand a breath apart
Remembering a budding flower
Lovely angel wings flutter in my heart
As I recall those sweet
Love filled hours
Among the things which move the waves along
Is my tender vision of your hands
A gentle grace with moves so strong
My ebb and flow
At your command
A dove's wings sweep across this flaming blush
Spreading like the rising sun
Upon a chest of happiness a burst of rush
Softly hints of an eternity
Of two becoming one
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
10 comments:
Awesome Neva...This evokes memories of long ago.
Sounds like you have a permanent smile of happiness on your face. Our greatest joys and our greatest pain, both make for great poetry.
There an ethereal quality to this poem, as Phill said, awesome.
just lovely, dreamy and beautiful neva
The flow of words you have penned is wondrous. The joys of love never ends. I got goose bumps! Brilliant my friend. : )
This description of love is wonderful .... Great poem Neva ~~
this is really nice! Neva, bravo and thank you for an awesome poem :))
its when i need refreshed and reminded of the affirmative power of Love, i know these pages and words will always uplift
Beautiful work
you catch the mood perfectly
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