My heart is so thirsty, come and rain me words...........
"Is there not a breeze that walks amidst the skiesCatching raindrops of forgotten thoughtsReturning memories to spin and riseFilling corridors which onceWe thought held onlyNaught" I especially like that verse.Great!!
The physical form you've used compliments the beauty of these words wonderfully, Neva.Lovely as always.
beautiful Neva! the picture and the verse are amazing! and i like the way you put it all together..WOW!:)
'let me be the water in those skies', such beautiful words, you have such a talent. This is another gorgeous poem, Neva.
Wonderful poem, here is revealed the mission of the poet., Provide beauty and inspiration messages, beautiful task.
......the water in those skiesA raindrop of memories not in vainThat gently..... love that verse and the way you designed it is wonderful as well talented girl:)
Dear Neva,I love your poem and the lovely shape, the thoughts and the words, so beautiful!Congratulations!
Great writing, Neva!
A beautifully well paint write.beautiful Neva ~~ thanks ~~~~
Stunning poem my friend
love the shape and the theme - a great piece of work
Thank you Revivor and everyone who read and made comments :)
If a single thought remembered can warm a heart againThen let me be the water in those skies...Beautifully put.
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