Raindrop of Memories
Who never passed upon a thought, then found it renewed
Like a compass pointing towards the North again
Is this a tribute which our heart ensues
Or, our minds merely
Playing tricks
In vain
Is there not a breeze that walks amidst the skies
Catching raindrops of forgotten thoughts
Returning memories to spin and rise
Filling corridors which once
We thought held only
Naught
If a single thought remembered can warm a heart again
Then let me be the water in those skies
A raindrop of memories not in vain
That gently passes through
Your mind and brings
You
Blissful sighs
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
Like a compass pointing towards the North again
Is this a tribute which our heart ensues
Or, our minds merely
Playing tricks
In vain
Is there not a breeze that walks amidst the skies
Catching raindrops of forgotten thoughts
Returning memories to spin and rise
Filling corridors which once
We thought held only
Naught
If a single thought remembered can warm a heart again
Then let me be the water in those skies
A raindrop of memories not in vain
That gently passes through
Your mind and brings
You
Blissful sighs
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
13 comments:
"Is there not a breeze that walks amidst the skies
Catching raindrops of forgotten thoughts
Returning memories to spin and rise
Filling corridors which once
We thought held only
Naught"
I especially like that verse.Great!!
The physical form you've used compliments the beauty of these words wonderfully, Neva.
Lovely as always.
beautiful Neva! the picture and the verse are amazing! and i like the way you put it all together..WOW!
:)
'let me be the water in those skies', such beautiful words, you have such a talent. This is another gorgeous poem, Neva.
Wonderful poem, here is revealed the mission of the poet., Provide beauty and inspiration messages, beautiful task.
......the water in those skies
A raindrop of memories not in vain
That gently..... love that verse and the way you designed it is wonderful as well talented girl:)
Dear Neva,
I love your poem and the lovely shape, the thoughts and the words, so beautiful!
Congratulations!
Great writing, Neva!
A beautifully well paint write.
beautiful Neva ~~
thanks ~~~~
Stunning poem my friend
love the shape and the theme - a great piece of work
Thank you Revivor and everyone who read and made comments :)
If a single thought remembered can warm a heart again
Then let me be the water in those skies...
Beautifully put.
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