Brilliance
Remembering the weeping water and the fire in the dark
Softly breathed into a dream of silence
Flashes of bright cerulean sparks
In a whirl
Of brilliance
Increasing waves enfolding around a storm arising
Of time forgotten, and exiting from itself
Clothed in white linen now admiring
Strength, kept upon
Your shelf
Urgent messages bend into multi-colored bows
Seeking the sun to peacefully corral them
Until a name makes them a vow
And their lights all
Become dim
Sailing on a half-hour's dream full of careless grace
I am breathing this wonderful silence
A tide of glory aglow on my face
Whirling in a flash
Of brilliance
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
Remembering the weeping water and the fire in the dark
Softly breathed into a dream of silence
Flashes of bright cerulean sparks
In a whirl
Of brilliance
Increasing waves enfolding around a storm arising
Of time forgotten, and exiting from itself
Clothed in white linen now admiring
Strength, kept upon
Your shelf
Urgent messages bend into multi-colored bows
Seeking the sun to peacefully corral them
Until a name makes them a vow
And their lights all
Become dim
Sailing on a half-hour's dream full of careless grace
I am breathing this wonderful silence
A tide of glory aglow on my face
Whirling in a flash
Of brilliance
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
10 comments:
beautiful, i can feel the velocity in this piece.
it has been a while seeing you around.
Glad to see you post.
very superb writing.
Thank you for commenting. I have gotten involved in so many places I could not keep up. I had to drawback a bit.
Immersed ,is the word explanatory.
The great poem Neva.. Thanks..
I love your use of imagery in this poem. It's absolutely wonderful!
This is a brilliant poem.
Nicely done
Beautifully written poem dear poetess...Adore your work!
Bravo!
a flash of brilliance
Brilliance - brilliant!
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