You Saw The Beauty
I laid my heart at your feet
And sat in front of you
Then I looked into your eyes
To see what you would do
Curiosity beamed from yours
Anyone could see
Such a fascination there
Looking back at me
A smile passed across your face
As in wonderment and awe
You took what I'd presented you
With its many flaws
You saw the beauty there
Overlooked the scars
Knowing that what placed them there
Makes you who you are
Copyright *Neva Flores *2010
7 comments:
You plucked the strings of my heart...
"You saw the beauty there...Overlooked the scars" ....It is truly a rare and wonderful thing to find someone who can.
It is often with great trepidation that we make our heart fully vulnerable before another, and with good reason, for the scars are evidence of the wounds that can come as a result of doing so in the past. But oh, the sweetness to have someone look upon our heart as you have described, with a curious smile. One who has their own scars and understands their significance and their positive contribution to our beauty.
It's a kind of love usually a mother gives her child,but here the branch of your imagination going beyond that.I like it.
Really Beautiful..
True beauty is in what's not visible...we need to look beyond..and you've captured this beautifully Neva,Thank you
So beautiful, thanks!
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