Saturday, April 17, 2010

April 17, 2010 - I Took The Moon

I Took The Moon

I reached up and caught the moon
And took it home with me
Placed it in my pocket and walked away
Thought no change it would bring

I felt so proud to have obtained
Such a lovely jewel
Absolutely free at no cost to me
But I was such a fool

When I ran off with the moon
I broke the heart of the sea
As the tides no longer knew what to do
And didn't want to be

The Earth cried as it began to be pulled
Way too close to the Sun
So much chaos began to reign
I had no idea what I'd done

The stars all went out one by one
They no longer wanted to shine
Without the face of their beautiful friend
Who smiled on them oh so kind

So I took the moon back and placed it high
Where it's supposed to be
Such confusion I created by taking
What doesn't belong to me

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010


johnnydod said...

This has to be one of my favorites

hayran said...

absolutely beautiful.thanks dear.

Kate Smedley said...

Stunning poem Neva, I'm with Johnny, I think it's one of my favourites too.

Kathy K said...

Powerful message done in such a creative way. We have no idea what chaos will be wrought when follow our own selfish desires.

phyllis said...

Just wonderful-- read several times-- very powerful ,lots in this --

swine said...

Wow!Very cool! Wish I could write like that, but sadly I have a deficient rhyme gene. its such a crime when you can't rhyme....
Cheers, and keep it up

Anonymous said...

Simply wonderful, I have read this poem many times. This is truly special. Thank you Neva

Bhimala said...

Thank you Neva! Such a gift to recall, harmony reigns when light we share!

TyHyChi Healing Networks.. said...

Wow.. so powerful..
sounds like it could be a theme for a whole book.. it certainly describes the ripple effect of All Being One.. Nice!
Thanks Neva!

Gregory M. Figg said...

thanks Neva beautiful as always but this one speaks to me had to check my pocket and see if i had anything in it i should put back...:) G.

Zuzanna Musial said...

Dear Neva,

This is one of your best poems or maybe one of my favorite you have written. Bravo for the fabulous imagination and definitely if you have taken the Moon it would be huge chaos in a Planetary system. Thank you for the Gem in writing!

Five Stars ~ [*****]

BBB said...

Fantastic imagination with this one Neva!

Stephen said...

That's a beautiful poem. Thanks, Neva!

Paramjit said...

Awesome. so nicely expressed