I Took The Moon
I reached up and caught the moon
And took it home with me
Placed it in my pocket and walked away
Thought no change it would bring
I felt so proud to have obtained
Such a lovely jewel
Absolutely free at no cost to me
But I was such a fool
When I ran off with the moon
I broke the heart of the sea
As the tides no longer knew what to do
And didn't want to be
The Earth cried as it began to be pulled
Way too close to the Sun
So much chaos began to reign
I had no idea what I'd done
The stars all went out one by one
They no longer wanted to shine
Without the face of their beautiful friend
Who smiled on them oh so kind
So I took the moon back and placed it high
Where it's supposed to be
Such confusion I created by taking
What doesn't belong to me
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
I reached up and caught the moon
And took it home with me
Placed it in my pocket and walked away
Thought no change it would bring
I felt so proud to have obtained
Such a lovely jewel
Absolutely free at no cost to me
But I was such a fool
When I ran off with the moon
I broke the heart of the sea
As the tides no longer knew what to do
And didn't want to be
The Earth cried as it began to be pulled
Way too close to the Sun
So much chaos began to reign
I had no idea what I'd done
The stars all went out one by one
They no longer wanted to shine
Without the face of their beautiful friend
Who smiled on them oh so kind
So I took the moon back and placed it high
Where it's supposed to be
Such confusion I created by taking
What doesn't belong to me
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
13 comments:
This has to be one of my favorites
absolutely beautiful.thanks dear.
Stunning poem Neva, I'm with Johnny, I think it's one of my favourites too.
Powerful message done in such a creative way. We have no idea what chaos will be wrought when follow our own selfish desires.
Just wonderful-- read several times-- very powerful ,lots in this --
Wow!Very cool! Wish I could write like that, but sadly I have a deficient rhyme gene. its such a crime when you can't rhyme....
Cheers, and keep it up
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Simply wonderful, I have read this poem many times. This is truly special. Thank you Neva
Thank you Neva! Such a gift to recall, harmony reigns when light we share!
Wow.. so powerful..
sounds like it could be a theme for a whole book.. it certainly describes the ripple effect of All Being One.. Nice!
Thanks Neva!
thanks Neva beautiful as always but this one speaks to me had to check my pocket and see if i had anything in it i should put back...:) G.
Fantastic imagination with this one Neva!
That's a beautiful poem. Thanks, Neva!
Awesome. so nicely expressed
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