Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Breathe - July 06, 2010



Breathe

Brilliant energy flows from the depths of your eyes
Striking deep chords in my soul
Radiating a sapphire glow which possesses my own
Altering my strength and control

A mesmerizing moment of time stopped in place
Takes hold, as I look deep inside
Your bottomless sea of sapphire delight
Slipping under the skin of my pride

Such shimmering echoes of primitive desire
Waves of crashing release
Captivate my soul when I look in your eyes
As they steal my breath from me

Your sapphire glow has taken control of my soul
As I swim in your bottomless sea
I have no need to rise to the surface for air
As your energy breathes life into me

Copyright @Neva Flores @2010

11 comments:

Kathy K said...

Another amazing piece of word painting.

Giulia said...

beautiful beautiful poem!

kdpgrahi said...

Great words. I am always in search of a similar eye to take away my breath.

kdpgrahi said...

The powerful words indeed. I am searching such an eye myself that can take my own breath away. But I realize now, only the fortunate can get. Thank you Neva for refreshing me like persons by your strong words

lorilynn said...

yes, love the water. could almost feel as if i was in the water. beautiful prose....LL

Maggie May said...

Beautiful prose. Glad she did decide to surface! I have a fear of the water.
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Heather Mirassou said...

Lovely & Stunning - Neva, thank you for sharing...

becca808 said...

I'm so glad I found your blog - so beautiful!

ensemble5 said...

All your fact admirably well written Neva... lovely... !!!

Timeless said...

Wonderful words that breathe new life,

Bren Parks said...

Your work never ceases to amaze me! So beautiful!