Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Night and Day - July 28, 2010

Night and Day

She quickly took the fiery sun from the astounded sky
Replaced its brightness with the moon
The sky was stunned for the briefest of moments
Until the air was filled with a sacred tune

A sacred tune sang by the dazzling stars of silver
Which filled the sky with radiant light
Emanating from their hiding places in heaven
Filling the sky with wondrous delight

Soon, the astounded sky forgot about the fiery sun
In peaceful bliss it smiled and listened
Now fascinated by the glowing moon and sacred tune
Sang by the silver stars that glistened

Without warning she returned and quickly took the moon
Replaced the sacred tune with fiery light
The sky was stunned for the briefest of moments
Then filled with wondrous delight

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010


johnnydod said...


kdpgrahi said...

Nice descriptions and enjoyable to read.

Jonie said...

Wow, wonderful, so well done! Thanks for the smile :-)

Kathy K said...

This was brilliant! Truly loved it.

ensemble5 said...

A superb handling; you know play with words and embellish what we want much oubliez.Thanks Neva x.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem, brilliant interpretation .Juancav.

BBB said...

A beautiful write! Delightful to read!

Kate Smedley said...

One of your best yet Neva, I love the use of language in this and especially love 'the astounded sky'.

TJF4316 said...

You have done it again my friend...Another stunning and moving poem...

lorilynn said...

wondrously delightful

PoeticHeart said...


revivor said...

nicely worked around the main idea - liked it