Breathe
Brilliant energy flows from the depths of your eyes
Striking deep chords in my soul
Radiating a sapphire glow which possesses my own
Altering my strength and control
A mesmerizing moment of time stopped in place
Takes hold, as I look deep inside
Your bottomless sea of sapphire delight
Slipping under the skin of my pride
Such shimmering echoes of primitive desire
Waves of crashing release
Captivate my soul when I look in your eyes
As they steal my breath from me
Your sapphire glow has taken control of my soul
As I swim in your bottomless sea
I have no need to rise to the surface for air
As your energy breathes life into me
Copyright @Neva Flores @2010
Brilliant energy flows from the depths of your eyes
Striking deep chords in my soul
Radiating a sapphire glow which possesses my own
Altering my strength and control
A mesmerizing moment of time stopped in place
Takes hold, as I look deep inside
Your bottomless sea of sapphire delight
Slipping under the skin of my pride
Such shimmering echoes of primitive desire
Waves of crashing release
Captivate my soul when I look in your eyes
As they steal my breath from me
Your sapphire glow has taken control of my soul
As I swim in your bottomless sea
I have no need to rise to the surface for air
As your energy breathes life into me
Copyright @Neva Flores @2010
11 comments:
Another amazing piece of word painting.
beautiful beautiful poem!
Great words. I am always in search of a similar eye to take away my breath.
The powerful words indeed. I am searching such an eye myself that can take my own breath away. But I realize now, only the fortunate can get. Thank you Neva for refreshing me like persons by your strong words
yes, love the water. could almost feel as if i was in the water. beautiful prose....LL
Beautiful prose. Glad she did decide to surface! I have a fear of the water.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Lovely & Stunning - Neva, thank you for sharing...
I'm so glad I found your blog - so beautiful!
All your fact admirably well written Neva... lovely... !!!
Wonderful words that breathe new life,
Your work never ceases to amaze me! So beautiful!
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