Saturday, May 8, 2010

May 08, 2010 - Moon Dancing In Your Hands

Moon Dancing In Your Hands

Exquisite chains of unseen hours
All lie in fantasies
In countless dreams of unbloomed flowers
Moon dancing in your sea

Petals soft on beds of sand
Tremble at your touch
As their spirits are awakened by the hand
Of love's own velvet brush

Soulful cries of blissful glee
Echo to the moon
Resounding from the heart's own sea
Left enamored by the bloom

Beauty sweet and triumph slow
Swirling in the sand
Painting strokes of blooming glow
Moon dancing in your hands

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010


Kate Smedley said...

'Exquisite chains of unseen hours', a stunning opening to a stunning poem. One of my favourites of yours so far Neva.

Newell said...

Lovely sentiment from a lovely heart!

lorilynn said...

another winner, liberating and free spirited!!

phyllis said...

Stunning in it's simple complexity -- Delicate images--- really stunning--

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BBB said...

Wow is right! Great one, Neva!!

ray said...

Neva, many have complimented you on your use of imagery, including myself, but the thing about it isn't that it gives you a visual image, but more so one of affect. As I read your poems, the magic in them is the sincere feelings they convey. But sometimes they reconnect me to some old familiar pain, and I lose it!

Faith Hodge said...

Completely exquisite - I love it!

Anonymous said...

From somebody who is ruled by the moon, once again I am lost in your dreamy words.