Saturday, June 26, 2010

Refine - June 26, 2010

 
Refine

Promises made beneath the moonlight amass in unison
To sing their entrancing song to the stars
Intoxicating lyrics so sweetly sung in harmony
Persuades the most radiant one to brightly beam from afar

Such alluring suggestions ring throughout each stanza
Compelling the brightest star to outshine
Each of its bright companions with its luminous light
As its own shining radiance, it refines

Reaching out into the heavens, the star beams with delight
Burning with all the essence it holds inside
Awaiting all the promises made beneath the moonlight
Anxiously hoping that its light does not subside

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010

7 comments:

Phoenix Montoya said...

Beautiful write!

lorilynn said...

"Reaching out into the heavens, the star beams with delight
Burning with all the essence it holds inside..." so cool!!

Anonymous said...

True love is like an endless nuclear reaction, ever burning like the sun or any other star!

phyllis said...

Wonderful images-- clear, romantic - beautiful

revivor said...

anxiously hoping - for some, this is love!!

AFHodge said...

I love this poem dearly!The anticipation clearly speaks brilliantly yet softly! Such an entrancing poem, Neva!

kdpgrahi said...

Beautiful. The message is clear and promising