Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Becoming - August 25, 2010



Becoming

Are you looking out the window of effortless perception
Glancing with no interest at the ordinary land
Planning a concise method of astounding metamorphosis
Exacting some excitement in the plan

Do you envision spaces filled with elegant contemplation
Titillating predictions of delight
Then polish and enhance your wings of gossamer
Seize the very moment and take flight

Soar into the gilded heavens with an optimistic smile
Seeking out the challenge of the rare
Flourish in the glowing essence on the edge of reality
Taking hold of the potential, you find there

A transformation of your spirit will unfold in conclusion
As you soar into the depths of your plan
An astounding metamorphosis has taken place inside
Sculpted by the imagination at your command

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010

13 comments:

johnnydod said...

Another gem N, it flowed so lovely, in face I had to read it a couple of times I liked it so much.

Andy48 said...

Thank you for sending this. I always get inspired when I read your blog.

Kate Smedley said...

Thanks for another beautiful share Neva.

SuziCate said...

Lovely...last stanza "A transformation of your spirit will unfold in conclusion
As you soar into the depths of your plan
An astounding metamorphosis has taken place inside
Sculpted by the imagination at your command" really spoke to me.

BBB said...

Wonderful write!

Chris G. said...

Very meditative. The whole thing is a treasure, and the picture certainly sets the scene. "A transformation of your spirit will unfold in conclusion"...Beautiful. The scope of your imagery and the scope of your imagination continues to impress. Keep it up!

Eric Alder said...

I love your word choices - very rich language. Very nice, Neva, as usual.

Claudia said...

i like the optimism in this poem and my favorite line is..Seize the very moment and take flight...

ensemble5 said...

Lovely, lovely poem Neva, your written are breathtaking, touched the happiness... .Merci to you...

emily wierenga said...

i wrote of metamorphosis today too, friend... you write beauty. i hope you might join me for imperfect prose on thursdays? thank you for visiting my place... peace, e.

Neva Flores said...

Emily, what does imperfect prose consist of?

she said...

inspiring - a motivational gem

tracyhsays.com said...

You have amazing talent, Neva, and you prove it every day, and today is certainly no exception. Well done!