Sunday, August 29, 2010

Unconfined - August 29, 2010


Enlightened by the insight found in ultimate reasoning
Your emotions run as bitter as wine
Wisdom gained as you find the conclusions
Riding on the backseat of your mind

A beam of comprehension, the likeness of a spark
Abolishes the dark shadows of the day
As your dedication to leave the acts of suppression
Is slowly poured into the vessel of clay

Feel the glorious liberation, freedom from restraint
Pouring from the vessel so free
As you release your spirit from those who confine
From the clay vessel of boundaries

Pour the fire of comprehension and enlightenment divine
Into your vessel of clay abundantly
Take up your glorious wings and fly into the radiant sun
Unconfined and so wonderfully free

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010


Jonie said...

Brilliant, so wise and beautiful and yes, it is so wonderful to be free!! Thanks!!

Anky0112 said...


loved your blog... your this very piece... its so vivid... so free..

keep versing
viva la vida :)

Anonymous said...

Neva, what a wonderful blog you have here! I have read all the life affirming words here on your main page, and I love what I see!

I was especially moved by the last verse of "Unconfined" here. They are words that I wish I'd thought of. Beautiful!

PS: Oh and also, a big thank you for visiting our little blog! In answer to your question, you can subscribe by clicking the red button towards the top left of the page. Hope this helps! :)

TALON said...

I love that the wisdom was riding on the backseat. It's wonderful to feel liberated.

Anonymous said... do you do this every day? These deep and wonderfully written poems amaze this poet. Bravo on this one, another beauty :)

Eric Alder said...

Eww! Bitter wine!

I could really taste that line!