Saturday, August 28, 2010

Tears of the Bluest Moon - August 28, 2010



Tears of the Bluest Moon

Captivating radiance streams from the glowing reinforcement
Satisfying the anchoring of the bluest moon
Appealing to celestial spheres with such delightful notions
Reflecting off the glass of a bottomless lagoon

Swirling kisses of lighted jubilance dance upon the waves
Sweetly admiring the gratifying view
Tasting all the glints of teardrops falling from his face
Transparent as the crystal fallen dew

Angelic faces with wings of gossamer appear upon the glow
Staring up wistfully at the bluest moon
Wondering if he cried because the sun had left his side
When she disappeared behind a sandy dune

An enthralling music filled the air from the wings of gossamer
Singing truth to the tears of the bluest moon
Words of heavenly delight filled his aching soul that night
Reassurance he found in their tune

The captivating radiance still streams from the glowing
Yet the bluest moon cries there no more
See the bluest hue disappear with all the glints of tears
As he watches for his sun from the shore

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010

12 comments:

ensemble5 said...

Beautiful,,Delicious poem Neva ....with words on a what find path everything which makes live.... x.x.x.

Kate Smedley said...

I love 'swirling kisses of lighted jubilance'.. just gorgeous work again Neva.

BBB said...

Beautifully written, as always! :)

lifeloveandmisery said...

a very beautiful poem... if I may critique, you use "the" a whole lot. try reading through your poem but skipping all unnecessary "the's" and see how it flows then. take care and thanks for the read!

lorilynn said...

wow, majestic in every sense of the words. truly beautiful neva. i am in awe of your gifted talent you have been blessed with. i think you are a genius!!!!!

Jonie said...

"singing truth to the tears" .. wow!
Great poem!

kdpgrahi said...

A fantastic poem indeed.

Eric Alder said...

I'm always surprised that you seem to 'churn-out' these poems so quickly, yet they're always well-developed and moving. You have the gift, Neva!

JRM said...

I love it! I wrote a small piece on a Blue Moon prompt a little while back - maybe you'd like to read!

Enjoy & Thanks!

http://www.workspacewritings.com/2010/06/under-blue-moon.html

Jingle said...

fabulous writing!

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ph_the princess said...

this one I liked the most !