Quiet of the Offing
Look yonder at the graceful misty suggestions
Delivering a gentle welcoming gain
Evanescent, yet so remarkably memorable
Infused with the kiss of rain
A fine gossamer glaze of crystalline blue
Creates a jubilant rhapsody
Vigorously dancing within the rushing embrace
Of the passion, known as the sea
Flawless perfection, delicately fragile as porcelain
Unfaltering, lines of exquisite detail
Quietly content the eye of the beholder
On a stately sensational scale
There is splendid comfort in the quiet of the offing
As the cherished waves rush ashore
Appealing to all of our tender hearts and minds
Compelling the joyful need for more
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
Look yonder at the graceful misty suggestions
Delivering a gentle welcoming gain
Evanescent, yet so remarkably memorable
Infused with the kiss of rain
A fine gossamer glaze of crystalline blue
Creates a jubilant rhapsody
Vigorously dancing within the rushing embrace
Of the passion, known as the sea
Flawless perfection, delicately fragile as porcelain
Unfaltering, lines of exquisite detail
Quietly content the eye of the beholder
On a stately sensational scale
There is splendid comfort in the quiet of the offing
As the cherished waves rush ashore
Appealing to all of our tender hearts and minds
Compelling the joyful need for more
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
13 comments:
A poem well articulated and perfectly delicate.
Well wrought poem, Neva. Finely tuned. Appreciate the complementary beauty of the illustration. Poem on ...
Wonderful Neva! :)
fragile as porcelain, beautiful words describing delicacy of splendid comfort for more.
This is beautiful! Seriously good. Very well constructed...an excellent poem! Bravo!
Beautifully well written Neva as sweetness, a delicacy happiness this poem.... I love x.x.
There is splendid comfort ...
lovely words, great poem, delicate.
Fantastic poem my friend..so delicate...to perfection. Loved it :) Hugs x
I just love 'infused with the kiss of rain', you are a wonderful poet Neva, just outstanding.
ah your words are so delicate...a wonderful poem for a sunny afternoon here...love the word evanescent...
lovely words and phrases in here
amazing job!
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